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Old 10-20-2010, 04:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Orifiel Whitedeer View Post
I used up all my brain juices at work today, so no helpful feedback here. I agree that it was a fun read but the first person did confuse me a bit, lack of concentration on my part. But keep at it, I love the characterization.
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