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Old 08-11-2013, 06:45 PM
BaronGrackle BaronGrackle is offline

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I've got a basic plot for the Alliance short story!

* A Human begins fishing
* He catches some driftwood, tangled wire, and other stuff
* A mysterious figure comes up behind him and asks what he is trying to accomplish
* The human says he's fishing
* The mysterious figure asks, "What does that mean to you?"
* The human doesn't have a good answer, not at first
* The figure suggests the human close his eyes and calm his mind

. . .

* The human catches a huge fish
* He turns to face the mysterious figure, brandishing his catch triumphantly
* The mysterious figure is a Jinyu. It slaps him in the face.
* Jinyu leave the Alliance forever
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