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There was a little too much fighting for my taste, and too little plot. Dorn got introduced and was out of my mind before he meant anything, which isn't bad in itself, but the fight with Dorn was boring because he meant nothing to me, I mean. And it seemed a bit rushed. Not that I blame you.
Hiraxen was built up and I was very curious about him, but he died like a little girl and I guess it was over so quickly in that sense that it was a let down. Mostly because Eric just never struck me as being that powerful, which was part of his charm as a mere mortal. Anyway, I hope the critique didn't come across as too heavy, because I nonetheless have really enjoyed Home, Sweet Home so far and am looking forward to your next chapter, as always. Sorry it took so long to catch up, but Christmas had me busy.
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I didn't feel like it was vital to give these characters very epic endings, since they are not a part of the central conflict of the story. I do think, though, that Laterbrus' and Hiraxen's chat should have been longer.
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Holy fricking fuck I knew it!! I knew it was Guy. Well actually I didn't I though maybe it was the Mograine kid who went into Outland. The one the old ashbringer questline mentioned.
But this was a really nice chapter, I wonder where they are, probably outland? But well, I would love to make a more meaningful post, but I am really very busy. But I promise to write one after I return, and speaking of it, thanks for posting this before I left!!! Now I am even more intrigued about whats going to happen next. Well then! A great work Kerrah!!
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Wooooooooooow. Guy Sliverberg. That was worth the wait. Took a very long time, but it was worth it.
It was great to see Kaisafa. It was also great to see that Laterbrus didn't turn out as a goodie-two shoes. I remember saying, years back, that by the end of the Rage, I was surprised that Laterbrus had turned into some sort of hero without any explanation, which he didn't seem like in the beginning.
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If only Wulf and Devius were here to see it.
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Oh, well. I think delving into Kaisafa's mind for just a little while was fun too. edit: In retrospect, putting that revelation in the interlude may have been a bad idea, but whatever.
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I actually had a dream about the interlude last night. Even before I read it.
In my dream, it was prose. But being a dream, it was utterly nonsensical poetry. It was so nonsensical that I realised I was dreaming and thought "Hey, I haven't even read the interlude yet!" The Blue Child, huh? That is epic, my friend. It was also, as always, well written. I hope the Zinine connection is explained, too.
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Nice and interesting interlude!!!!! Hope to see whats coming next.
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I've been suffering from writer's block. I used the occasion as an excuse to make myself hammer through it. There's probably a bunch of typos and errors in this initial version, but it'll be worth it, just to get it done.
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Despite I realized immediately the moment the characters say 'wolves' that the worgen inhabit the Blue Child. I was really surprised, though for some reason it makes a lot of sense, it somehow feels like many pieces are falling together and forming a greater picture. I wonder who the human is, but he is probably the first wizard to dicover the worgen. I think you mentioned he disappeared or something in a previous fic. And like I said before I am very glad to have Guy on the cast, one of my favorite characters. Well thats all!! Keep on the good work.
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As usual, quality writing, dialogue and characterisation. I enjoyed reading all of it, in particular Guy talking about the Crusade.
As soon as you introduced the Worgen I thought "Oh yes, I bet we will see Renthlivend again!" And after all these years, we have at last. And when the wise one turned out to be human, it became evident that you created one hell of a cliffhanger. Can't wait.
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Also, I wrote this timeline during the writing of the chapter to get myself straight with the ages of the characters. I had to go back and alter the years on Papa Yorgen's gravestone, and I ignored some of the official WoW timeline years, but mostly it fits to everything.
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Well I just finished reading it and to be sincere I think I will start researching a way to sue you for getting addicted to cliffhangers. I was expecting more revelations!!!! But well, I can't say either that we didn't got enough in this update or that even the udpate wasn't good in itself.
Like always, looking forward for more. [By the way nice timeline.]
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Aside from the Worgen/human offspring which I found implausible, I liked the chapter very much indeed. I guessed it was Roland, remembering your ideas of him vanishing due to interdimensional travel. I remember originally you'd planned for him to end up on Draenor and be Garona's father back in the day, a long time ago.
Anyway, that is a cliffhanger indeed and I look forward to the next chapter.
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I know how uncomfortable it is to be pressured into writting, but just here to remind you there is people eagerly waiting to see how this unfolds.
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And for a second I thought he finally wrote something. Tut tut.
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Proving I always post first after him
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It was a very nice update, even if not ''MUCH'' happened, I like how the pace is going even if you update as scarcely as this. Which brings me to the most important point:
YES, please do so, even one time a month is good enough for me.
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It was a bit slow, but still enjoyable. Kra'osha and Dab'ra are finally growing on me after many years of wishing they were dead. I like how they've just been dragged along on these crazy adventures. I almost feel sorry for them.
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