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Old 10-28-2014, 03:53 PM
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Sorry for the bunch of text.

TLDR: Your demon buddies have the artifacts, and they say you'll get all the godhood powers you ever wanted if you kill Cho'gall right now.
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Old 10-28-2014, 03:57 PM
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You're apologizing? For showing us Cho'Gall singing "put the line in the coconut?"
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Old 10-28-2014, 04:11 PM
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*clap* *clap*

This was really, really entertaining. I wished you wrote Warcraft 3! Killing Gul'dan off was such a waste.

My wish:

Gul'dan becomes a god, shifts into the real world to St. Anaheim and gives Chris Metzen the biggest Halloween-scare in his entire life. That will teach him that no one makes Gul'dan a second-class cartoon villain! Never!

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Old 10-28-2014, 04:32 PM
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Okay, so you guys don't think I'm cheating, I just went back and edited something I'd forgotten. I needed a reference to "armor" in the post about Sargeras's death and the Eye, and now it's there.

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Old 10-29-2014, 08:22 AM
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One more question.

Wicked, Les Miserables, Rent, or Phantom of the Opera?
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Wicked, Les Miserables, Rent, or Phantom of the Opera?
Wicked. It ain't easy being green
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Old 11-03-2014, 08:00 AM
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Wicked, Les Miserables, Rent, or Phantom of the Opera?
1) Les Miserables,
2) Wicked,
3) Phantom of the Opera.

"Rent"? More like Dent MIRITE.

//EDIT// - Also, for my sanity & sense of writer's-self-esteem, I really need to stop reading this... It all just flows so nicely. :<
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Les Miserables I guess? I don't really imbibe musicals on a regular basis, but I think that's the one Terry Pratchett's Night Watch is parodying.
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Old 11-03-2014, 10:22 AM
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I'll let others chose cause I don't know what to vote for, but really good job .
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"Since Medivh's death. Since my sleep. Is that how long he has been here? Is that why I can't rid myself of... of his laughter, within my head?"

Gul'dan turned to the stony, lifeless avatar of Sargeras that dominated the Chamber of the Eye.

"It was so difficult for me to find my path back home after that, to remember the way. It should not have been so hard. That was you, wasn't it? You albatross, you fox. You... followed me. Did you know I would be there for you to follow? Or was it merely your good fortune, combined with your bad? Did you know I would find my way back, and even moreso that I would survive Doomhammer's wrath? That I would survive Doomhammer not because of any act of yours to protect me, but because of my own genius and invention, my own development of the... of the...."

Gul'dan closed his eyes and, not for the first time, and not by the effort of his own decision, stared into the center of Karazhan. Time was different in Karazhan. One could see so much, if he knew where to look.

It was as if he could see the full length and width of existence, only in miniature. So accurate a microcosm.



And, once again, he saw Teron Gorefiend. Why did he see Teron Gorefiend?



No, it wasn't Gorefiend. It was someone else. Or was it? What was Gul'dan looking at? Where was he?



"It is the clerics of Karabor that hold the cloak of Gorefiend."

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"The Eye. The eye of the storm. The shattering of unbreakable armor. The entrypoint of a god's death. The carnal bond between human and dark titan."
"With Gorefiend's items restored, there is but one last piece to this puzzle: A host.

Surely you did not believe the fairy tale that I told you. The Altar of Shadows is my prison. Without your help, I would have been stuck here for all eternity. Now, I will take over your body and you will destroy my captors and break these bonds. Refuse and we will both be stuck here forever."




For the first time, Gul'dan realized he was not the one who had created the Death Knights.

. . . .

. . . .

. . . .

. . . .

He could end it.

Gul'dan turned around and leveled his goat-headed staff toward the object in Karn'Flopsy's hand.


"I can end it all now, can't I? I know the lengths and limitations of this one artifact, at the very least. I could SHATTER it now, into two or ten or a HUNDRED pieces, and what would you do then, Sargeras? What could you do then? Have your guardians kill me? Would you?!"

Karn'flopsy and Mamanoch remained silent. They knew better than to interrupt.

"And... what happens now if I fall lifeless, with no trespasser inside my mind for you to follow back? Would you die as well, hmm? Or would you find yourself yet confined here, within an oh-so-mortal prison of my lifeless skeleton, until another amongst the living could be tricked into playing host? Would that be your fate, titan?"

He could do it. He could shatter the Shadow Orb right now--those little daemons wouldn't be able to stop him. He could end this. And yet...


"Master. . ."


"Cho'gall?"

Someone else had awoken.
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Old 11-03-2014, 01:47 PM
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::roll roll::
1. immediate, full-blown Timewalker assault
2. no Timewalker assault yet
3. no Timewalker assault yet
4. no Timewalker assault yet
5. no Timewalker assault yet
6. no Timewalker assault yet



The Cho' head whispered.


"When the child of the three realms becomes as light, the ancient power will be released. The earth will tremble. The seas will rise up in answer, and all will be madness. A new day will dawn, bringing with it chaos or peace."


"Cho'gall..."

But the 'Gall head screamed:



'Cho smiled dreamily. "Master, it is you have become a god of chaos! I have tried to clear your way, to set the path toward the oblivion of twilight. But in the end..."




"I'm limited.
Just look at me!
I'm limited.
And just look at you, you can do all I couldn't do, Gul'dan!
So now it's up to you.
For both of us!
Now it's up to you."

"I've heard it said
that people come into our lives for a reason,
bringing something we must learn,
and we are led
to those who help us most to grow
if we let them
and we help them in return.
Well, I don't know if I believe that's true,
but I know I'm who I am today
because I knew you..."

"Like a comet-crashed infernal
as it slams into the earth.
Like a stream of annihilan blood
and its burning, pained rebirth
Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
But because I knew you,
I have been changed for good!"


"It well may be
That we will never meet again
in this lifetime.
So let me say before we part:
So much of me
is made of what I learned from you.
You'll be with me
like a handprint on my heart.
And now whatever way our stories end,
I know you have re-written mine
by being my friend..."

"Like a ship blown to the sea's depths
by unnatural decay.
Like a gift of strength and haste
that drains your life away.
Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
But because I knew you..."


"Because I knew you..."


"I have been changed for good!"


"And just to clear the air:
I ask forgiveness
for the things I've done you blame me for."


"But then, I guess we know
there's blame to share."


"And none of it seems to matter anymore!"

"Like a ship blown to the sea's depths / Like a comet-crashed infernal
by unnatural decay. / as it slams into the earth.
Like a gift of strength and haste / Like a stream of annihilan blood
that drains your life away. / and its burning, pained rebirth."

"Who can say if I've been
changed for the better?
I do believe I have been
changed for the better."


"And because I knew you..."


"Because I knew you..."


"Because I knew you...
I have been changed for good."

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Gul'dan used that same dagger forged from the mountains of his own world, which Kil'jaeden had given him to puncture Mannoroth. This time it was over much more quickly, and with silence: Gul'dan knew exactly where to cut. Cho'gall would have surely preferred a drawn-out death, with screaming and agony... but Gul'dan wasn't one to dote on the desires of others.

He turned around, covered in the ogre-mage's blood, and looked again on the used avatar of Sargeras. He could swear to seeing a faint flicker just at the center of its chest, though there was no way to know--nor any reason to care--whether it was an effect of his imagination.

The Shadow Orb and Jeweled Scepter lay nearby--Karn'Flopsy and Mamanoch must have left them on the ground and made themselves scarce. That was wise of them. He could always summon them later if he required them, at some future moment when he was less likely to murder them on sight for the sake of principle.


"Did they really defeat you? Any of them?" he spoke to the empty shell before him. To his future self.

"My agent had already faced him before, that Medivh, with a force of other skilled orcs. She didn't come close. Am I to believe that, after so short a time, she was member to a raid that triumphed... and with the aid of two mere humans? With the aid of an old man, whom the natives here prop up based on his birth alone, not worthy to rule over them but fit enough to bind their fasces until my kind is no longer a threat? And that... that student? That child? That one would have perished at the hands of good Nothgrin if not for your own interference, Sargeras? Was he the deciding factor?"

Gul'dan closed his eyes and pressed his teeth together. They turned to a grim smile.

"I suppose now you have learned not to underestimate the influence an apprentice. Good for you."

He strode forward, blindly passing the Orb and Scepter at his feet. Instead he mounted the stairs leading to the crown, to the Eye. Almost of their own accord, his hands worked the sacrificial dagger to pry open a tiny shard from the stone chest. Sharp enough to cut a pit lord - sharp enough to cut a titan's manifestation.

And then, holding the dark-crimson shard in his hand, he stared into it.

"I wonder. Have you yet learned, not to underestimate the influence of a host?" Gul'dan lowered his voice to a whisper. "Because I don't think the three mortals could have defeated you, unless you allowed it. And I do not believe you were the one who allowed it. And if not... then how much of you was you? And how much was the human?"

The chamber was so silent. So much more silent than Gul'dan had come to expect, from a tomb. Funny that.

"I suppose we will find out together."

Gul'dan thrust the shard into his temple.

"Within me an unfathomable lust was sewn - a desire to wield the fury of ethereal storms and to stand unscathed within the dying hearts of burning suns."
-Gul'dan, The History of Orcish Ascension


The Eye burns with hellfire, as an eerie red glow blurs his vision. Fresh blood flows into his eyes, and he begins to hear the tormented whispers of the damned. He has done what he knew must be done. The essence of Sargeras is contained and in his possession, for now. He prays that he has become strong enough to wield the daemonlord and yet keep it at bay. Although he has been fortified by his quest, he can still feel it, clawing its way up from the dark recesses of his soul. Fighting to retain control, Gul'dan's thoughts turn to the shadow of the crescent moon.



The crescent is the scythe of death, the weapon to reap the world as he sees fit. It can never be allowed to grow. It can never be allowed to overtake the moon's shadow, to overtake the moon's own identity, to overtake the darkness.

The sun's light shines as a crescent, but it would sleep without the moon. It is the shadowed moon that stands atop the world, the darkened moon that calls to the tides to obey it. The tides of darkness.


"for I am Gul'dan...
I am darkness incarnate.
I will not be denied."

He stands atop the throne of his predecessor, the same divine crown atop his head. The Scepter and Orb pulse throughout his body, connected and amplified through the essence of the Eye, coursing like a limitless closed circuit. He beholds the living world above the Tomb.

Not tiny Tharbek. Tharbek has squandered and tarried - his toy brigade will crumble with a sneeze. No, Gul'dan beholds instead the fullness of this planet.

Wherever there is light, there is shadow, and it is this shadow that he uses to see into places he cannot travel. Wherever the slightest shadow is cast, his sight can enter and view.

He sees everything.


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I have the perfect music for the outro:


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Second War.
Another war, another destiny
on this never-ending road for refugees;
these orcs who have destroyed my liege
will surely lay a second siege!
Second War!


We were not bound until today
But how can we stand, unless united?


Second War.


My world is threatened by the blade
And yet with you, my world has started!


One more chance to right the wrong


I shall meet them at the gate!


One more chance to shine the Light forth.


They shall never break the gate!


We shall crush our wicked foes


Goblins, undead, orcs, and trolls!


I don't think they know we're here.


One more triumph for the Horde!


Will I make my father proud?


One more conquest towards freedom!


Shall I join my killer there?


One more weapon to unfurl!


Do I dare hope we are saved?


What is my fate if we fail?

[AND ALL]
The time is now, the battle here!


Second War!


One more war of pure distraction
For that upstart warchief fraud,
Then I'll crush these little insects
They shall feel the wrath of god!


Second War!


Sow a bit of rage
Plant a small discord
Watch them do your job for you
With axe and sword
Here a little blood
There a taste of fel
When we pick the pieces up
They'll beg for hell!

[AND ALLIANCE]
One war for a new Alliance!

[AND HORDE]
Raise the banner for the Horde!

[AND ALLIANCE]
Every man will be a king!

[AND HORDE]
Every king will be a corpse!

[AND ALLIANCE]
There's a new world worth defending

[AND HORDE]
There's a new world to be won

[AND ALL]
Do you hear the coming tides?


Preserve my clan, forgive our crimes!


Second War!


I will not fight this war today


One more war fought on my own!


How can I break the chains that bind me?


I will join these people's heroes
I will take their mortal form
They will work to my advantage
I shall use them as my own


Second War!


One more war that's worlds away


A war that shall not set my course!


A war before my world has started


One more war 'til revolution
I will raise this mighty thrall
Then he'll lead these broken monsters


Watch the creatures dance
Hear the titans cry
Everything is our fault
Though you don't know why!


This war that began from my deeds
Has now hold of our destinies...

[ALL]
This war we will discover
What gods and mortals have in store
One more fight
One more fray
Second War!

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He sees everything.



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1. Warcraft II: Tides of Darkness Human wartime situation
2. Warcraft II: Tides of Darkness Orc wartime situation
3. Warcraft II: Beyond the Dark Portal wartime situation
4. Day of the Dragon wartime situation
5. Warcraft III: Reign of Chaos wartime situation
6. World of Warcraft: Tides of Darkness wartime situation

He sees the lands of the Eastern Kingdoms, broken and devastated by the unstoppable juggernaught of the Horde. None have been able to withstand their might. Stormwind, Ironforge, Gnomeregan, Stromgarde, Aerie Peak, Quel'Thalas(save what lies behind the magical curtain of an enchanting little Sunwell), human-ravaged Alterac, and Dalaran. All fallen by the Horde's strength of arms, by the contributions of Gul'dan's sorcery, and by (he was hesitant to admit) the pragmatic strategic mind of one Orgrim Doomhammer. Tiny cries at Kul Tiras and Gilneas still hold the pretense of life. But truly, the Alliance is at its end times.

Its armies and leaders have all been broken--save what stands behind the walls of Lordaeron's capital. And yet, this was before Gul'dan's quest to the Tomb. Before Doomhammer turned to find his armies cut in half. Doomhammer has fled now, and the humans of Lordaeron believe themselves safe.
How little effort would it be, to tremble the land and cave these walls inward to the earth's embrace? How easy would it be, to destroy the tiny remnants Alliance at its rallying moment of hope, to prove his quest a worthy one and to succeed singlehandedly where the accursed Doomhammer had failed?

Yes, now Gul'dan sees Doomhammer, desperately taking to the seas. He is regrouping at the old naval base, near Crestfall. He hopes to push south and cross back to his defenses at Blackrock Spire. But what is this? Beneath the ocean, Gul'dan sees the small metallic overlay of what the gnomes refer to as a "submarine". Doomhammer doesn't see it amongst the waves near his base, nor does he see it as its crew reports back to the human known as Proudmoore. A battle is about to happen on these tides.
Oh, how easy it would be for the sea to rise, to rise and reject the warships of Alliance and Horde both, to snuff the worthless lives of Doomhammer and Proudmoore and whoever sails among them?

He sees the near future. He sees Doomhammer and his skeletal crew followers returning to the supposed safety of Azeroth, to the imagined protection of Blackrock Spire. He sees the human Lothar, Turalyon, Lightbringer, all the so-called heroes rush to meet the Horde there.
How easy to wait until they gather, and then to crash the mountain upon them?
How satisfying to meet Doomhammer as he lands, and to play with the Horde's own rituals to eject him from leadership?

But even the whole of this continent is so tiny, so insignificant. The crescent within Gul'dan claws into him and turns his head westward, to a prize. A prize that the crescent imagines Gul'dan will be unable to resist.
An ancient land of oldest magics. A warrior people nearly conquered once, and now able to be conquered in truth. A single Tree, coursing with power beyond even that Gul'dan was tempted with at the Tomb. The only thing on this world worth salvaging, before its destruction. Sargeras thirsts for it, as does Gul'dan.

All is lain before him. Where does he strike?
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... I am awestruck. You have simultaneously parodied & pastiched two of my favorite musicals into one of my favorite games...

I am no longer worthy to make decisions that move this story along.

//EDIT// - Also I'm now a Faerie Dragon. That seems like a step... down. : P
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Wow. This is getting even better. I say go take control of the horde, crush the eastern kingdoms and then go rape cenarius and his night elves. Then go to space n shit, Gul Dan is godlike now anyway.
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Gul'dan's skin burned and festered. The elements of the world tasted him, longing to consume the power about him, for they could not help themselves. Neither individual nor element can. With time, the world would suffer the same pains of addiction that Draenor had. Then it would be time for him to move on.

But first, some personal matters. The Eye inside Gul'dan's head throbbed with knowledge, knowledge that the human archmages had mastered. The Jewel on his scepter glowed in response, recognizing what the draenei had understood for eons. The Orb in his hand, not following the direction, instead pulsed through Gul'dan and the other artifacts to augment their action and grant certainty to the decision. It was time to leave the Tomb.

Where are you, my knights?

There you are. Hold still.








"Hear me, my people!"


"Hear me! I know we have suffered defeats and setbacks, and our numbers are sorely diminished! I know the humans are following us, that they think us beaten! They think we came here because we were fleeing their might, as a dog would flee its master! But they are wrong!"



*BAMF*


"Hello there, Teron," Gul'dan whispered. "Have I missed anything?"

The death knight did not answer Gul'dan, did not even look at him. Instead, he took one step to the side--out of the warlock's path. His eyes remained fixed forward, as if the whole of his attention were still on Doomhammer's speech.

Gul'dan looked in the same direction.


"Throughout this war, just as the last, we have conquered all that we beheld! Their mighty fortresses and capitals have ripped apart like spider-webs, before us. Their ships of war have bobbed in caverns and harbors like driftwood, fearing the iron and guns of our wave riders! Again and again we have slaughtered the armies of man, elf, and dwarf like so many herds of talbuk!"


"And gnomes!" someone shouted from the crowd.


Orgrim didn't recognize the animal's name, but he went with it. "Yes, we have slaughtered them like so many herds of gnomes, or pigs, or any of this world's beasts of burden!" He heard the goblin whistling and cheering as loud as anyone else, so he must have hit the mark.

"Yes, we may have been forced to fall back to this our stronghold, but not because we were defeated! Our armies remain unbeaten on the field of battle! We are only here because Gul'dan's treachery has cost us dearly! But still we are the Horde! And our footsteps shall shake the world!"

Four claps echoed through the valley, slowly and methodically. Everyone present turned toward the cloaked figure who was making them.


"Well spoken. Well spoken indeed. How far you have come, Orgrim Doomhammer. Back to your point of origin. A fraction of your strength. And still, how your voice resounds with inspiration!"

The Horde had parted, leaving a wide path between the two.


"Gul'dan. Some said you would be foolish enough to show your leprous face among us again."

Doomhammer glanced back to the direction of Varok Saurfang. Saurfang's head tilted ever so slightly toward the warchief. Doomhammer's eyes glanced down toward his own chest, for an instant, and then turned their attention back to Gul'dan.

"I did not believe them, but I am pleased to be proven wrong."


"Then you must find yourself routinely pleased. For I have indeed returned, Orgrim, to correct your follies and clean the mess you have created."


"My follies. This coming from you, the traitor who stole nearly half of our forces outside the humans' capital, snatching victory when it was within our very grasp?!!"


"Shut your filthy mouth, churl! And how, do you imagine, did you even reach those gates? Turn and ask the ogre-mage, there beside you. Turn and ask the death knight, to the other side. Ask these goblin creature-pilots I see among you. Except, friends, I am confused. What has the warchief done with your armed turtles, or with your other warships? Indeed my quest was joined by those of the Stormreaver and Twilight's Hammer, but those are only two clans. Why are there so few warriors now among you Blackrock, you Black Tooth Grin, you Bleeding Hollow, you Dragonmaw?"

He felt it was too risky to address the Burning Blade at this moment. Those present might interpret their clan's name as an invitation to attack neighbors at random.


Orgrim grunted. "The Dragonmaw, for one, mostly hold their position still. They were fortunate in that your betrayal did not reach them--as it did so many of us. And when their lips pass your mouth, warlock, you should remember well that you are not the only one who has contributed magical weapons to our effort."

"But speaking of lives squandered in so many clans, I notice you have returned alone. And I find myself confused, Gul'dan. What has become of the two clans you stole from the Horde, in pursuit of your mysteries among the waves? Have you used them up so quickly?" He snarled. "Do they now rest with Durotan and his Frostwolves?"


"You knew Durotan's fate long ago, Orgrim. And yet, your complaints were much softer then."


"The greatest mistake of my life. If I had only guessed how many Horde lives you still intended to throw away..."


"Thrown away, indeed. Imagine my surprise, Orgrim Doomhammer, when, after contributing weapon after weapon to the Horde's war machine, after embarking on one final quest to guarantee our ultimate victory... I discovered you had sent your own clansmen to their deaths, shirking a campaign against the Alliance in order to attempt a petty blow against your fellow orcs!"


Orgrim slammed the Doomhammer against a protruding rock, shattering it loudly. "Do you find fault with my command, warlock? Have you found shame in the path of victory carved by myself and my commanders? Did you scoff as I achieved in weeks what Blackhand had failed to achieve in years?! Do you mourn that no city or kingdom has been able to best me on the battlefield, that there has been no threat to the Horde's ascendancy since I took command, up until the point when your sudden disappearance robbed our armies of the inevitable victory they had earned?!!

Gul'dan started, but resisted the urge to step back. Unfortunately, Doomhammer had a point. From the moment he had become warchief until Gul'dan sought the Tomb, the Horde had known only success.

The warriors knew it too; they had been there beside Doomhammer for each bloody triumph. The crowd had remained on the fence to this point, but now they shifted decidedly in support of the warchief.

It was time to take a different tact.


"Orgrim! You are not fit to rule the Horde!"

The crowd erupted in cheers and anticipation of spilled blood.


"And who shall challenge me, Gul'dan? You?"



Who, indeed? Vaporizing Doomhammer's head would probably be an appropriate public display of your power and divinity.

Yet, there is something to be said for the subtlety of old. From a separate section of the crowd, you can see the sons of Blackhand--Rend and Maim--watching this confrontation attentively. Neither of them is their father. But still, you recall that they have no reason to love Doomhammer.

What of Kilrogg Deadeye? The old soldier has been steadfast in his support of Doomhammer, but he also followed the Shadow Council's orders before, as heartily as anyone else. A moderate and crowd favorite might keep some of the more extreme sections of the Horde in line.

But is that a good idea, keeping the Horde in line? The Burning Blade Clan chomps at the bit excitedly, longing for blood and thinking very little. There may be very little difficulty in sending suggestion to their minds that there is no need for warchiefs, no need for leaders in the Horde any more. In the guise of blademaster anarchy, their simple minds would be easy to manipulate.

But again, who are the enemies here? The Alliance is closing in. Perhaps a demonstration of power is in order. Succeeding where Doomhammer failed would bring a delicious taste of shame, which you wouldn't have access to if you just killed him.

Decisions, decisions.

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For some reason this made me laugh really hard.

I'm torn between pretty much all the choices. I'd love to see Kilrogg warchief, but that doesn't really suit this story imho (considering the overall crazyness).
I think my choice would be to kill doomhammer, let lose the burning blade and use the overall chaos to try and enroll Rend, Maim and some other orcs (using godmode psychic powaz if needed). Then either crush the alliance or tp to kalimdor.

Really nice job once again btw. I'm really enjoying this !

EDIT: oh and give the orcs a nice show killing dh, don't just vaporize him!
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Double post for bump's sake! Is this gonna continue soon? Am I the only one waiting?
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I think he's waiting for more than 1 person to vote.

Problem is, I don't wanna ruin his story at this point. :<
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I think he's waiting for more than 1 person to vote.

Problem is, I don't wanna ruin his story at this point. :<
But he has proven he can incorporate people's opinion and still write a great story, dont be shy I dont wanna be the only one voting each time :o .

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Alright, alright, you win... I'll vote.

I say "vaporizing doomhammer" sounds the coolest... But not before he witnesses your prolific might. Preferably this should be done after riding him into victorious battle against the Alliance.

I don't know enough about all those Orcish heroes to say who would be the coolest... But Burning Blade sounds right up Gul'dan's alley. His dark, twisted, murderous alley.
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